Comments on: Why My Sales Letter Sucked http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/ Direct Response Entrepreneur Wed, 25 Jan 2012 23:10:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Courtney James http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-867 Courtney James Sun, 13 Sep 2009 14:54:13 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-867 Hey Dan, Loved that post because it made me think. I hope you post more of these. Sometimes the answers are hidden in plain sight which makes it all the more challenging. :-) Courtney Hey Dan, Loved that post because it made me think.
I hope you post more of these. Sometimes the answers
are hidden in plain sight which makes it all the more
challenging. :-)

Courtney

]]> By: Ryan Healy http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-866 Ryan Healy Fri, 11 Sep 2009 22:56:06 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-866 Excellent post, Dan. I'm going to try putting my entire pitch in an email and see what happens. Ryan Excellent post, Dan. I'm going to try putting my entire pitch in an email and see what happens.

Ryan

]]> By: Stephen Davies http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-865 Stephen Davies Fri, 11 Sep 2009 21:57:57 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-865 ... and thank you, Dan! It's been a while, so I almost forgot about the last post you made. Yeah, looks like a couple of us were pretty close on this one. When writing copy, I've found that by adding some sense of urgency to the offer almost always makes for better conversions. Kind of hard to "delay" when you are giving your target market a sense of urgency, such as a "limited-time offer". I'd like to see you post more frequently, Dan. Many of us out here enjoy reading your posts. The more, the better. Thanks! … and thank you, Dan!

It's been a while, so I almost forgot about the last post you made.

Yeah, looks like a couple of us were pretty close on this one. When writing copy, I've found that by adding some sense of urgency to the offer almost always makes for better conversions. Kind of hard to "delay" when you are giving your target market a sense of urgency, such as a "limited-time offer".

I'd like to see you post more frequently, Dan. Many of us out here enjoy reading your posts. The more, the better.

Thanks!

]]> By: Dan Przyojski http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-864 Dan Przyojski Fri, 11 Sep 2009 19:54:47 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-864 Interesting good info to remember! Dan Przyojski Interesting good info to remember!

Dan Przyojski

]]> By: Benjamin Stewart http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-863 Benjamin Stewart Fri, 11 Sep 2009 19:19:08 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-863 Dear Dan, This was a great golden nugget piece of information that can save someone's campaign from disaster. That just tells you how something so tiny can ruin the profits of a campaign that was destined to succeed. Dear Dan,

This was a great golden nugget piece of information that can save someone's campaign from disaster. That just tells you how something so tiny can ruin the profits of a campaign that was destined to succeed.

]]> By: Sheridan http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-862 Sheridan Fri, 11 Sep 2009 18:24:24 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-862 This is so helpful. I just ran a promo a couple weeks ago. Made exactly this mistake. If I'd only known this then... Ah, hindsight. Keep the good stuff comin'. Sheridan This is so helpful. I just ran a promo a couple weeks ago. Made exactly this mistake. If I'd only known this then…

Ah, hindsight.

Keep the good stuff comin'.

Sheridan

]]> By: Bill Jeffels http://www.dobermandan.com/why-my-sales-letter-sucked/#comment-861 Bill Jeffels Fri, 11 Sep 2009 17:05:30 +0000 http://dobermandan.com/?p=1220#comment-861 Great post Dan. The Muscle Head market is a die hard bunch. I remember John Carlton saying a while back an ad he did was pulling a super insane response and I believe it was a $70 product. Which we know isn't alot in the MH world. I think it also helps to be a lifter... you can write like your sitting around talking to your buddys. Talk like they talk. Take care, Bill Jeffels Great post Dan.

The Muscle Head market is a die hard bunch. I remember John Carlton saying a while back an ad he did was pulling a super insane response and I believe it was a $70 product.

Which we know isn't alot in the MH world.

I think it also helps to be a lifter… you can write like your sitting around talking to your buddys. Talk like they talk.

Take care,

Bill Jeffels

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